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"Mrudu web world " is a complete portal for Mrudu web world's web related projects.
The projects are done complete manually by our team members.
Our Designing Team :
Mrudu malay Mohapatra , Priti sudha Nayak , Susree abilipsa swain .
We are proud to be a part of Arena Multimedia,Dilsukhnagar
Our Management Team :
Priti sudha Nayak , Rudra narayan Mohapatra ,Jyotir mayee Nayak,Sonita Behera,Shankar das swami & Subhasis Nayak .
Sunday, September 5, 2010
Final letter to Ritz , (a story of love & lost) - 1
"Miss you" was the last word written in the diary of Sameer ,says his best friend Mahi to his brother .
"Sameer" a smart boy of 5'4" staying in Austrilia far from family in sajanpur,a vilage in east India .He was loved by all ."Ritz" is his love interest.She means him the world . He loves her a lot & was crazy about her.
One fine day,Ritz got angry & didn't talked to him for whole day.Sameer called her repeatedly but she didn't receive the call.He cried a lot & his heart started paining.Doctor prescribed him some medicines .That night he had a nightmare,it was of his death.He saw that his family & ritz are crying around his dead body.He cried the whole night & decided to give all the happiness to all the people around him .
As usual the very next morning he went to attend interviews but as usual the only thing he got is another cause of pain.He was a scholar but every time he tries something luck kicks him.This is not the only problem in his life ,he used to get limited money from his parents & he has to manage in that.
That morning Ritz called & scolded him as he didn't call him for last 3 days & told him that not to talk to him for ever .Sameer cried a lot & lied in his bed holding his pillow .The next morning he was found dead.No one could guess the cause of his death .
His parents broked down to tears after seeing their only son's dead body.
They found a paper in his pocket .
The last letter to Ritz .....
Dear Ritz,
I miss you.I know you will miss me.But ..............................
to be continued ...
I seek your valuable response :
This is the first story penned by me . Please post your valuable comments .The main part of the story "The final letter" is waiting for your response to release ....
Written by : Mrudu malay Mohapatra (Web-designer/Freelancer)
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GOOD TRY... BUT AFTER READING , I FELT THAT THIS STORY IS QUITE STRAIGHT FORWARD..THE STORY MAY BE SHORT BUT THERE SHOULD BE SOME CHARM, MEANS NOBODY CAN EASILY GUESS ,WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN NEXT LINE. SO I WANT TO READ SOMETHING DIFFERENT IN NEXT TIME.........
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Thank you brother.i will try to give my best in my next story.This story is an emotional story & the main cause of death of the central charector is mentioned in "The final letter" to be published soon ......
ReplyDeletewaiting for next part of story...
ReplyDeletewaiting for next part of story..
ReplyDeletenice, u have written ur own story naa....... really nice n heart touching..
ReplyDeleteTanmayee Nayak:
ReplyDeletethats a nice story
story is nice.im also waiting for next story.it's touches my heart..........!
ReplyDeleteJiz ur concept was vry gud,may b the ending was vry dismal,bt writing was in modern approach,next time u r going to give the best of urs.
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